Have a screenplay, teleplay or other type of script? I will shred it to pieces for you (not literally).
I graduated Compass College of Cinematic Arts with a BFA in an emphasis on story / narrative structure. I have read numerous screenwriting books, written a number of feature screenplays, TV sitcom scripts, TV drama scripts and short films. I'm an award nominated filmmaker with two films on Amazon Prime Video. I've done script coverage for Hivemind Films, and have written as a critic / journalist for Screen Rant, MovieWeb, and Movie Pilot. I've even met some of the biggest storytellers in Hollywood, including Anthony and Joe Russo. TL;DR, I know how good stories are told, and would love to help you out with yours.
If you send me your logline, one page synopsis and your screenplay, I will read each piece thoroughly and give you back descriptive notes about your piece, including big picture stuff (thematic elements, character arcs, etc.) and little picture stuff (scenes that may not work, confusing dialogue, etc.). Many of the scripts I have "ripped to shreds" have gone on to be produced and/or pitched to major studios.
I will also be willing to consult you further down the road if you are struggling with your narrative after receiving my notes. :)